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Yes

I love it!
The abrupt interruptions in the tempo at points like the beginning definitely acquire some iron-like taste of psychosis. Great Job!

Yup, I know your dirty secret

BLUTONIUM BOY IS THE BEST SOUND PACK EVERRRRRR!!!
(I love you man)

Requiem

A poem for your loss, it's always tragic...
This song is an amazing tribute though.
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Don't grieve for me, for now I'm free,
I'm following the path God laid for me.
I took his hand when I heard his call,
I turned my back and left it all.

I could not stay another day,
To laugh, to love, to work, to play.
Tasks left undone must stay that way,
I've found that peace at the end of the day.

If my parting has left a void,
Then fill it with remembered joy.
A friendship shared, a laugh, a kiss,
Ah, yes, these things too I will miss.

Be not burdened with times of sorrow,
I wish you the sunshine of tomorrow.
My Life's been full, I savoured much,
Good friends, good times, a loved one' touch.

Perhaps my time seemed all too brief,
Don't lengthen it now with undue grief.
Lift up your heart and share with me,
God wanted me now, He set me free.

TommyUlysesGrant responds:

*sniff* Thank you so much ... your words are so pure, so right,

I Wish you all the best my freind :)

Ahh, to feel reborn

I didn't hate the song, but I didn't like it. It has that newfound song pride and joy feeling that comes from an artist who's vaguely new.
However, you made the same mistake that I did, and that was having no bass. C'mon man, you gotta have bass up in here!

The song in itself was confusing, and after a while it got annoying. There was hardly and variety in the synths, the drums, or.. hell the composition. You had a couple of bridges here and there, and every once in a while you would cut out an annoying piece from the production, but all what it lead to was the same thing I've been hearing since the beginning. Nothing changes much, and that's the weak point in the song. Plus it's too long....

I can spot a few good points, like the way you arranged it, it's main pattern is chaotic, in a good way, and I'm sure that's what you were aiming for. Also the percussion's arrangement, though completely repetative and annoying, I did see an effort to mix things up a bit.

I'd have to rate this song as 5/10, 2/5 for mediocrity.The song is okay for someone who's learning. If you're not new, or have been doing this for 5 years, then you have no excuse for this. But if you are, keep trying and keep heading on, and go for the big money!

Think about it, when you progress you will notice that your old work gets worse and worse. As each new song is better and better.

HAHAHA

I'm not fat!!!! :|
I seriously thought that someone from school submitted this after my submission XD

fizzypop2 responds:

Well it is based on someone in my school. XD
I'm glad you liked it =]

Oh Yeah

We all like the hella live effort put into the Drum N' Bass Free Form junk brah! Nice Job, and keep making it. (Adult Swim Bumps)

This is Epic

I seriously cannot help but look up at you, damn you, freaking towering over me. This song is what defines Tiesto if he was Canadian! And so do you my dear friend Kazmo! The tune of course, though copyrighted by T EST! OH! Still should be yours, all hail you man. Bass Drum is perfect for the sequence, however, is a little PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE-ish, I don't know how much I can criticize this, mainly because it's FL core. But it's great dude. Luckily, it's perfect.

Haha

I love listening to remixes of this song, there are so many. My personal favorite, and probably most popular is the DJ splash remix of this song. This is also a very very nice remix. The snare that comes in at 00:52 however seems a bit out of place in accordance to all of the other samples on this song. I liked hearing "Believe" at 02:07, it's was pretty satisfying.
The voice's cutoff could have been just a bit higher, after that could have started a bit higher, and went a lot higher, hearing it was very uncomfortable to me.
That Hyper/Super saw's LFO drives me nuts at 00:44, and that's also an uncomfortable sound.
I would have loved it if the Hyper saw was a bit hardstyle, that would have been cool.
Mastering needs just a little bit of improvement, just make the Bass a bit louder, and that hit at the end crackled a little bit.
Over all I do like the song, only criticism was put into this review, making it not that much. 7/10 3/5

SICK!

This is some fast ass shit man, it's uber good, and I don't really know what else to say, I'm typing so fast, the song's given me an adrenaline rush, but anyway, you should master it a bit better, not everything needs to be distorted, omg man your affects are like Orgasm divided by 0!!!!

Review

The composition and over all idea, tune of the song is quite catchy, but the song is so thin that I could touch it's spine through it's stomach.
I like the tune, but It's uncomfortable to listen to. At about 00:50 is probably the moment I like the most, mainly because the bass had a fatter sound.
The percussion is great, that ride cymbal played a little too much though, it could be a little bit quieter.
Composition is Top Notch, it goes from Dangerous, to Distressful, to Sad.
Over all it's definitely satisfactory.
I did enjoy listening to it, with a little shiftiness, but it has rounded up to a good song.

Marks-a-lot responds:

Thanks for the input, and I do understand what you mean. Right now I am really working on my soundscapes and on the depth of my songs and I can tell that it isn't a "full" track. My next song will be better though. I am not going to submit another song till I can get this right. Thanks again for the input :)

I'm a music hobbyist, or is it professional? Who knows?

John @Triented

Age 30, Male

IT

FL Studio

Dallas

Joined on 8/7/05

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