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[AOTGM - 3 - Beddings land (8b)]

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I know this is kindof a wierd thing to say reguarding 8bit songs, but this should be EQ'd a tiny tiny bit better.
But still, it's an amazing song to listen to while reading the story. Good job! :D
5/5 10/10
Check out my tracks!

Calamaistr responds:

You mean the panning or the volume? (pm me if you want)

Thanks.

-cal.

[You'll never know]

Hey!

I hear some beats, and synths I'm far too familiar with. Try to work your way with the synths, learn how to use them, create sounds from scratch, instead of using presets.
The biggest downside to FL Studio is it's preloaded samples are quite overused, try to use samples other than the preloaded FL Samples (If I'm mistaken then it's VEC, which is okay, but still overused)
When making a song that's 5 minutes long, it's kindof harsh when you have the same bass drum, beats, snares.
The song in it's self, disregarding the criticism, is a pretty neato progression from 2:10 to 2:50 you should really have some supporting sounds up in there to lower the repetition and add to the progression.
I was intrigued at 4:27, this is when the song (though distorted and a high amount of improvement needed) reached a sort of, nice, climax.
All in all this song is mediocre, but I do see some potential in it.
Check out my tracks too! 5/10 3/5

DiroNomer responds:

Excellent advice! Exactly what I'm looking for in a review. I will listen to some of your music. Thanks for reviewing.

[KO! - Summer]

Wow

This is quite different, always getting better you know.
Your songs always give me eargasms!
Thanks for coming back dude!

Karco responds:

Glad you liked it; thanks for the review.

[(FMC) -=Moving On=-]

This made it

I am certainly starting to become a fan of yours. Your composition kicks ass, I do notice that you use quite a bit of Nexus synths without editing them though.
This song starts to taste like owl city at 4:02, I think it's that sliding square, I mean it in a good way though.
You got those hihats rockin' man!
This song definitely shows some potential for you in the way of composition, you could create a trance symphony! :D

FunkmasterCatking responds:

WICKED SICK!

I really have been overusing Nexus for quite a while now, it's just got some awesome sounds and I can't help myself, xD

I have gotten some new stuff since this song though so hopefully my songs will start to sound a little less "nexusey".

Thanks for the review!

[(FMC) -=Edge of the Unive]

Goodness Gracious!

This song is absolutely beautiful. I listened to it once, gave it a 5, then another time I pulled it up I tried to give it a 5 again because I was so enthralled by how mysterious this tune is.
There are a few flaws like the bass drum being a little too fat, or some compression issues; BUT! all of those problems are drowned out by everything about this song that makes it perfect, so that's why you get a 10/10.
GOOD JOB! :D

FunkmasterCatking responds:

Wow man, that means a lot, thanks!

NOW LET US DANCE THE DANCE OF FRIENDSHIP.

[:O :O :O]

Yess

Dubstep was only born a few years ago, and it's becoming HUGE!
It's fucking great to hear you've adopted dubstep as well!

[In The Game]

Old times

Everybody misses the old times good friend, I have a couple of songs contributing to those old times.

I have lyrics to the next song I'm going to write.

-----
I've left all aside
so I could reside
The feeling that I can't keep inside
I've never known so much could happen one day
to decide I'd rather return to dismay
just to
feel
alive
Aghast that all hell's nostalgia passed by when I
shot, the gun, in the air
Remembering the feel that girls finger's
running through my hair
And understanding that the swingers
take double dares
And finding my inner self
To be quite unfair

To be quite unfair

I sat on the porch
wondering why
I felt like I couldn't sigh when
I realized my lung were filled
With precious smoke
That eventually kills
With every stroke

with every stroke
With every stroke
With every stroke

I felt alive for just one time
I realized all my feelings were mimed
When I reminisced my presence at least in her mind
I captured her stare
With a swift breath of air
And I felt alive for just one time
just for one time
just for one time
----

^- There ya go mate.
Anyways, I (fucking) love this tune man. I'm curious how to make that phase distortion kindof thing you do, hit me up.
Also, check my stuff out.
5/5 + 10/10 + Fav'd

yeajimmiboi responds:

No problem man i'll get onto you :)

[I hope you laugh at my...]

lul

Generated lulz, but nothing else.

[Madness 09' DnB Spat]

Yes

I love it!
The abrupt interruptions in the tempo at points like the beginning definitely acquire some iron-like taste of psychosis. Great Job!