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O_O

You are one very strange music author, this song was funny, and wierd. I have heard the end of the world cartoon and laughed, until I hear everything. It's about the world being destroyed, and holy shit did it have an effect. Good job on turning this song from a Joke, to a serious situation. It will happen one day.

Moving on to the song, it was kindof empty, Use some EQ-ing, and I loved the beginning. But it would be great if you used some real voice acting, try doing a song with your voice acting and it might turn out to sound cool, use a vocoder if your voice sucks. But it would still add a lot to the effort if you used your own voice.

Otherwise Great job on the story this song told.

Favorite part : "Also, take a moment to locate this planets emergency exit"

I thought that was clever, because THERE IS NO ESCAPE!

9/10 5/5

-DJ Triented

seecharley responds:

I'll agree with you about the "empty"-ness. Having *just* started making electronic music, I'm still on my garageband training wheels (I use Audacity for a few things too). Figure I should master what I know before I move on to more advanced programs.

As for the voice acting, it's something I plan on doing in the near future.

Thanks for the detailed review!

Orly?

It is sad, but it sounds like less of a tribute than it is a random mix up of emotionless expressions and happyness.
A death on August is sad,
A death on christmas is VERY sad.

I expected it to be very sad.

The Drums could use some effects, even though I like them.
The tune is original, but I have noticed, this song has no effects, that piano definatley should have had a reverb,
Unless you're trying to go old school.

Because without effects, this really really does sound like an old techno song, or even a different Genre.

However, the tune is really nice, and the composition is dynamite, but it needs some good mixing. Try opening the file and adding some effects and send it as a remix.

Nice job however, I would still have to blame you if you forgot to do the effects, lol.
You should have noticed it when making the song that it sounds really empty.

Good job on the song itself, it would be amazing if it had effects.

4/5 8/10

Nd889 responds:

Ok, i'll try to remember that...hopefully <_<

Well

They are cool, only if you haven't heard them before, it is a big deal to make them....sound original.
It takes gruesome practice to get drums to sound original, if you're using the drum pack that comes with FL.
I used to have a real problem with that, download some soundfonts though, with drums and stuff.
They're out there.
The song however was okay, kindof repetitive, and a fade-out ending?...how unoriginal,
Good luck next time :].

-DJ Triented

Heyo!

House is awexome, but to me this sounds a bit industrial.

YOU ARE AWESOME!

THIS IS AWESOME. I've never really heard much hip-hop.
But this is badass. Awexome!

p4c responds:

YESSS I AM A CASH MONEY MILLIONURRR STRAIGHT UP GANGSTURRRR

YESS!

Woah! This is really really nice. I love that sounds. This is infact a gift because you are going to let me use it in a rave. ^_^.
I love the way it sounds live and everything. Thats great.

Hope you make top of the week.

Davirus responds:

Sure!! Im glad you liked =3

Thanks for commenting ^^

OVER 9000!!!!!!!

THIS IS THE BEST NIGHTCLUB MUSIC EVER!!!

hmm

Sorry to say man But I didn't like it...The beggining was boring. It was a really hard song to get into. Hoever, I will give you credit for the effort.

kevs91 responds:

yeah, the beginning is much more desolate feeling (and the little pops suck...its a bitch to try to reduce those) so i absolutely agree with you there. but i do feel like it gets going into a nice little reluctant groove, which i enjoyed at least. still, i can certainly see how hard it would be to get into.

i am working on a number of other songs right now, so hopefully i'll latch on to something i like and get it finished and submitted. hopefully it won't be another month from now, though.

thanks for the review.

Hey man!

Sup CnB. lol similar to DnB. Whatever. I love this song. Great happy fealing. I noticed this song has the initials LSD. LAWL.
Great job on the drums man. It was amazing!

HEh

It's actually pretty catchy man. Good for an early song.

I'm a music hobbyist, or is it professional? Who knows?

John @Triented

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Dallas

Joined on 8/7/05

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